colaboration/critique request

Problem: I'm not a very good composer.

Solution: You?

Want to colaborate? Hook-driven rock, or maybe something else?

Or, if not, how about some feedback on these lyrics? They were written for pre-existing music. Other samples available upon request.

Thanks,

Morgan

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NADIA

Nadia met a man Asked her to join him for dinner What the hell, hard to tell Seemed kind of friendly

This old man, he played games Reached for her under the table Broke his hand, told the man Where he could go

Every last night Nadia wasted Nadia'd need to say:

One will not know when Have to try again

CHORUS: Super lucky No not Nadia

Pray for luck for Nadia

Nadia had a plan Giving up men all together Tried it out, learned about Various methods

For a while, things were fine But she could not shake the feeling Had to cave, nature's slave Biology

Every damn time Nadia dated Nadia'd lose a day

Every last night Nadia wasted Nadia'd need to say:

One will not know when Have to try again

[Chorus]

Such a shame to seem so lost and helpless Male dependence left her feeling numb Knew she probably should learn to love herself But still she would not rule out getting some

Have to have some fun Half the battle won One will not know when Have to try again

Hello my dear namesake,

I write melodies quite often with no lyrics and have been looking for somebody writes to pre-existing melodies for a while. I am busy with the fifty song challenge at the moment, but if you stick around I'd be more than happy to try a couple of numbers out after that.

Try a selection of the songs at
http://www.soundclick.com/mikemorgan

The top one is a rough sketch but most have them have been produced 'properly' or as close to 'properly' as I can currently get.