- lyric for comment, thanks

Here's a new light hearted lyric that developed from one of those 'fun' encounters in the street!

No music yet - not sure what vibe would go well with it - Country, Pop, Reggae...?

Comments welcome, thanks

Andy
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/andylefevre_music.htm

Corridor Shuffle © 2003 Andrew LeFevre

Country all the way, but a corridor means indoors not out on the street..

You came this close to making a positive contribution in this newsgroup <g>, but no, the word can have a topological connotation.

Andy wrote :-

Andy,

These are good, any musical style light and finished will suit

Not sure if I'd use the word corridor in V2, and Honcho, being Honcho, would want to to bring out the sub-plot more and change the last chorus to

'Doing the Corridor Shuffle with someone else.'

Pavement Shuffle would work as well, unless it was for the Americans, then it would have to be 'Sidewalk Shuffle' LOL

Richard Songwriting, recording and creative & links http://www.angelfire.com/music2/richhoncho/index.htm

A selection of RMMS at

I don't know who you are but shove it where the sun don't shine. I did nothing but ask a question, if I was sure about it I wouldn't have had to have asked

I thought the same thing, but was told I was out of line, when I mentioned

Bumperfroggy wrote :-

Hotel corridor worked for me

Just me - with Sidewalk you have the alliteration which makes a title stronger, Pavement is good as Andy is UK, also I prefer the prosody of a two syllable word.

Anyway, we are now talking 'artistic licence' and whatever Andy goes with is fine with me.

Richard Songwriting, recording and creative & links http://www.angelfire.com/music2/richhoncho/index.htm

A selection of RMMS at

Your question was rhetorical, and therefore equivalent to a statement of fact, the error of which I had the pleasure to correct.

But you said just now that you had only asked a question. What point exactly did you prove by asking a question? Or are you just disagreeing with yourself as usual?

You didnt' correct anyone, the question was not rhetorial in nature. Perhaps you should learn the meaning of the word before using in incorrectly