New Song: We All Are One

This is a protest song that is being considered for a CD of similar music. I wanted to keep it within the folk genre and yet update the sound. Did I get close?

It's the first song on my sounclick site: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/ davidbdonlonmusic.htm

Of course, even if you disagree with the politics you can comment on the song. I'm not a rabid liberal and probably won't do another of these. I don't like to divide people up.. Anyway, here are the lyrics:

Hiya David I've listened to it 3 times, I really like it. Congrats