One for the Road - Remix

David F. Cox posted the lyrics to One for the Road about a year ago. I posted a link to the first version and over the last year have been playing with it from time to time. Any thoughts?
http://www.mp3.com/notalknotouch

Sorry if this posts twice. Had some problems last night on Deja, said it posted but 20 hours later its still not there.

Regards,

Joseph P. Barron

Now I'm having problems with Outlook Express on my wife's computer. Sorry.

Having one of those days. Switching News readers is a real pain. Hope this puts the right address on my computer. Sorry about the postings.

I think it's totally excellent, and I'm not even a big fan of the genre. It's relaxed and poised and comfortable. Definitely a keeper.

Jay Seeley

Thanks for the kind words. Actually, I'm not a 'country' music fan for the most part. I just read the words and said, this is country material. After playing with it a bit, I broke some of the country rules, bent others.

Regards,