Stupid new song - Quasi-Pavlovian

Okay, this is a really dumb song I wrote in like 20 minutes last night, but, well, I like it. So I'm gonna post it, and I don't expect anyone to actually listen to it. It's only 1:10.
http://youhavenochancetosurvivemakeyourtime.com/mp3/ Quasi.mp3

Lyrics:

We're quasi-Pavlovian You ring the bell and we bite the hand We see the rabbit and bang the gong We feed the monkey and wag the dog yeah

We see the monkey and bang the dog And wag the rabbit and feed the gong You ring the bell and we bite the hand Cause we're quasi-Pavlovian yeah

'Jon Cornell'

I think this is pretty interesting! It looks like it could use some fleshing out, but I really like the concept.

The only that nags at me is that the 'ring the bell, bite the hand' stays intact in the second verse. I'd like to see it mixed up to pick up a new meaning, maybe 'We see the monkey and bite the dog.... You bang the bell and we wring the hands'...-

cool song. kinda has a commercial jingle quality to it. the music that is. 'bang the dog'??? lmao

Thanks, man - glad you liked it. Yeah, 'bang the dog' cracked me up, too.

Thanks for listening...

It might be a fun song as a hidden track way 16 minutes out at the end of a CD... in that case if you could work in a reference to pressing play again at the end of a CD that would be neat...

joe w larson

Personally, I've always wanted to do something like this:

12. Last Song 13. Sixteen Minutes of Silence 14. Hidden Track

'Jon Cornell'

If I expand on the silence and number of hidden tracks I may have the recipe for improving my (hypothetical) albums.

David F. Cox